Unwritten Soul

Breaking Boundaries - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Cheers of the same glass
Here we live in togetherness
In a classy wine glass or just a table cup
But, still in layers, we never mixed up
As oil and water forever split up

A line of separation
Draw boundary between us
Touch each other surfaces but never hold phases
Never, upside cross the line to reach down
While, impossible is the line, false mind?
Forever isolating us, you and I
As you an oil and me, water

Undelivered lavender fumed words by you
Stayed there without pass the unbreakable line
Never, i know, cant have your adored scent in me
As there is a boundary, a thin door, locked for us
Tried, yes we tried, again and again
Essence of crimson red heart color
Dropped in our shared glass
Tried to be one by persuading our eyes
Hiding the differences of our layers
Again it can't, dissolved in me, unstained you
We stay as two layers of colors and perfume
In a traditional destiny of oil and water

Together we live, but by layers we always be
In a crystal glass or in that old jar
Close enough we are but a line make it far
Here we still, but our life never be one
Because of this boundary, nothing is easy

Expanding our hearts, as yours surfaced on mine
Exchange understanding, transferred between us
Emulsify the boundary, dissolving separator line
Resolving mind, for heart to heart bind
Holding together after found a place to fit
Swirling our souls, breaking all boundaries
As whole applied to share a fumes of lavender
Be in the bliss of red heart, crimson color
The rule of oil and water now is gone
For a mixture of love

Bound heart to heart
Understanding, breaks boundaries
Unison of different classes
Cheer in the same glass
Togetherness, we share life,
Finally, be as one
Just one
A class in a glass
Cheers! !

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is a poem that i pushed 'Understanding' as a concept of living, Living in togetherness never mean we live all as one. Referring a glass as a place to stay together, i consumed this idea to tell, this world is a glass and countries are layers...No war, just unite as one 'Earthian', even in a country we stay in big community, it sounds like we live as one but no...i always disturbing by the mind that separates our life from staying in togetherness when some issues like different ideology, races and ethnicity, cultures, religion and thinking point out by somebody..even in the same house, it does not guarantee that we having one voice. Understanding is the ultimate one to merge all differences as it carry respect inside too...Differences are beautiful, just like a fume only dissolves in oil(without alcohol) but dyes mostly dissolve in water only, universal solvent... just imagine if we can hold each other don't we have colors and fume...we never get whole when we think we are the superior one. Everything comes with rare abilities, sum up with be in togetherness! come! ! Emulsifier, is used to mixed to phase of oil and water...Food or cosmetic applied this for products but for human who want to emulsify different hearts, understanding is our emulsifier..

I dont want miss a chance to write a poem in the last day of June, so i grab a paper and pencil to write my short idea instantly...but it took a day to finish as i have short time to write. Hope u enjoyed. Be happy and smiley_Unwritten Soul

Comments about Breaking Boundaries by Unwritten Soul

  • Gold Star - 36,621 Points * Sunprincess * (1/11/2014 10:43:00 PM)

    ..dear soul...first I must say I love the title...and the theme is exceptional...your poet notes explain perfectly...even living in the same country the people are not as one...different communities are different...even in America there are different types of communities depending upon social status and class....you have penned a wonderful poem...and I enjoyed it much...thanks... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (9/4/2013 4:33:00 PM)

    understand breaks boundaries togetherness we share life. good thoughts on life (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/22/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    Cheers! A class in a glass.. Cheers for the togetherness we share...beautiful poem. Each lines so well expressed. Loved it very much..

    Thank you Soul for the inspiring comments for my poems...thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/28/2013 1:06:00 PM)

    Profound Riddle is solved by using simple entities like water, oil, surface, glass etc..wao from where such ideas come in your mind? i am still digging in these lines.

    Holding together after found a place to fit
    Swirling our souls, breaking all boundaries
    As whole applied to share a fumes of lavender
    Be in the bliss of red heart, crimson color
    The rule of oil and water now is gone
    For a mixture of love.

    i must say that you are not only a poetess but intellectual philosopher also.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Frank James Davis (4/7/2013 3:12:00 AM)

    An amazing poetic analogy!
    Brilliant, Soul! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,513 Points Tony Karas (12/12/2012 10:49:00 AM)

    So incredibly moving! An excellent write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (8/28/2012 3:53:00 PM)

    The beauty of a tear captured in a poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (8/12/2012 1:01:00 PM)

    You are right, there is no 2 person who would understand each other perfectly, because what you see in others, it is in you. If you do not understand them, they will not understand you either. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 86 Points Hamid Negah (7/29/2012 2:47:00 PM)

    nice poem, One day we see the world with no Boundaries. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (7/25/2012 9:10:00 PM)

    does not the oil calm the moil, when oceans are tossed about
    cannot two hearts beat as one, when each breathes in and out
    can there be a sweeter thing, your hand so proud to tout
    your love in me can never be, no never room for doubt (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,717 Points Valerie Dohren (7/22/2012 9:58:00 AM)

    We are all as one deep down - great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 142 Points Black On Black Arts (7/20/2012 9:09:00 AM)

    you are a one of a kind poet your words jump at the reader you are truly breaking boundaries (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Jinal Oswal (7/19/2012 10:32:00 AM)

    I have no words Soul, this write is one of the best of your collection. How much do we long to see ourselves in others... One voice, one heart, one wish... No fight and all the things for everyone's right... The only mantra for this is understanding as you said... You understand me I understand you and then nothing can come between us... I thank the poemhunter team that they gave us this platform where we can share such beautiful thoughts with each other, where we come together irrespective of all the boundaries and beliefs we share our thoughts and make it one thought.... Thank you Soul for this beautiful, moving poem.. I loved it! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (7/13/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    it is decided. all boundaries shall be broken on day. In ur line
    Bound heart to heart
    Understanding, breaks boundaries
    Unison of different classes
    Cheer in the same glass
    Togetherness, we share life,
    Finally, be as one
    Just one
    A class in a glass
    Cheers! !
    Strong. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (7/13/2012 6:06:00 AM)

    There'll be no war if we think that we all are humen! ! ! ! ! ! !
    'Tis a great poem, soul......
    Love has no boundaries and throu' love we can cross any boundaries, which has created by man..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nurain Ali-balogun (7/12/2012 9:46:00 PM)

    I hope this poem goes a long way in breaking the boundaries we have set for one another, let not one be oil and one be water. I like the note you included...it made it a lot easier to understand and want to concur. Keep up the good work my friend, this is just brilliant. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 97,767 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2012 6:59:00 PM)

    Finally, be as one
    Just one
    A class in a glass, , , , nice to feel and good to have such will.fine poem...10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (7/12/2012 8:16:00 AM)

    Sparkling idea and the humble tone of the writer is really soothing. The imagery used here is fantastic.There is everything in togetherness.Lovely concept and I pray God for giving dignified life for all mankind! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shadow Girl (7/8/2012 1:48:00 AM)

    This is beautiful - both the theme, the style and the whole concept. Totally loved this. Brilliant write
    xo (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (7/6/2012 5:43:00 AM)

    Each stanza deserving max. marks. If I simply say it is a brilliant and nice poem, you may not agree. But in fact, i like the analogy expressed through your pen. I feel your pen is a mighty sword which will never fail to defeat envy of all kinds. I do feel my self too poor to comment on any one's creation bxoz my heart and mind always tries to find nectar and a positive attitude of life. I enjoyed, b happy and smiley. Have a pleasant day. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 30, 2012

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