Bridge To Our Hearts Poem by Unwritten Soul

Bridge To Our Hearts

Rating: 4.5


Two hearts of different bodies
Separated more by broken one
Silence may amplify the distance
Hiding the truth and avoiding heal
We cant denying how it feel
When we still remember to forget
It will remain unremoved
Perhaps you forget our memory?
Too much sorry
You believe silence build for thinking
Restless about silence is waiting
Emotions play hate to love
Truly never love to hate
It just me, you and time

Ground and sky in distance far
Will be separated always in a space
Still the cloud and rain can be a love language
As same for sun and star from in touch
But stars inspired me at night sun warms everyday

Time to revise you and me
Friend is not about hating
Friend is all about loving
Break the silence in us
Of two separated hearts
Link by the bridge
And loves walk in
Exchanged in our hearts

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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New idea but not be included..should i? ?

Bridge is important to connect two parts,
Broader soul bridge will connect for someone between two hearts
Be a way for a soul to walk and visit another in place called heart
But when communication was stopped, left as abandoned yard
So keep manage to keep bride stronger even time goes hard
Remember, a bridge is a door of our hearts
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nasarudheen Parameswaran 31 December 2010

A good didatic poem on the 'bridging'force.Nice.

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building bridges are so important, lovely write, my friend, just lovely

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Aqeb Benazir 31 July 2011

I really appreciate the msg u conveyed, one of the important qualities and aspects of life expressed. great piece of art this is! ! keep it up! This is actually a Written Soul; -p

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Sharad Juneja 18 April 2012

a very nice wirting..... the bridge.....after the construction i would like to stand with u thr ;)

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Walterrean Salley 04 August 2012

Friendship is so important. Let the heart be the bridge that reaches new friends. Love the imagery. A beautiful poem, beautifully written. Thank you for sharing it.

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Mj Lemon 05 September 2020

This verse is such a great reminder that there are times that show distance is not measured in miles or kilometers, inches or centimeters, but through the intangible emotions that divide/unite people who may be standing side by side. Great verse, Soul

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Sally Plumb Plumb 12 October 2018

Ground and sky stanza..... lovely. Vg

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 July 2018

Time to revise you and me Friend is not about hating Friend is all about loving Break the silence in us Of two separated hearts Link by the bridge And loves walk in Exchanged in our hearts, ...............touching expression with nice theme. We must have soul bridge among two hearts in order to enliven love and relationship. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Ramesh Rai 03 August 2013

Friend is not about hating Friend is all about loving So break the silence Lets break the wall Start build the bridge To link our hearts

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 July 2013

Beautiful write.. Good message. Build the bridge to link our hearts..

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