Breacking Point Poem by Bibie Ramtu

Breacking Point

Rating: 4.5


You know it is not right

That you keep pushing me so tight

Breaking me through the wall

It is becoming a dangerous love



Each day you teach me to last longer

Because each tear makes me stronger

As the pain grows when we cry

We both know that it still will dry



Everyday I feel like it is warfare

Can't take no more, it is unfair

I don't want to kill you nor do you kill me

Since there is a thin line we are about to cross



You love me

Then you hate me

Id rather plant all my dreams in the jungle

Than fight with you daily



It is your choice to make up your mind

There won't be a next time

Try walking in my shoe

I also have my breaking point

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 31 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Ramtu. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 June 2015

Full of hurt and pain the poem flows nicely.Liked it.

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Anita Sehgal 24 October 2012

the pain of being taken for granted...poignant

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