Bonfire Poem by Kevin Eaglesfield

Bonfire

Rating: 5.0


November, with its frost and smells,
Brings fond memories flooding back,
Of the last bonfire party at my grandma's,
Before she passed away.
The night was tingling and alive,
With excitement and expectations.
Even Grandad, usually grumpy,
Chuckled as he lit the fire.
Paraffin made the wood and old crates
Flare up quickly and light our eager faces
As the sparklers were handed round.
Then the barrage of colours and sounds began.
Catherine wheels scorched orange holes in the air,
Roman candles made us cower in delight,
Fountains sprayed the lawns with glitter,
But we stopped for supper half-way through;
Jacket potatoes, hot-dogs and onions,
Mushy peas and mint sauce and hot soup,
Then red and sticky toffee apples.
Great-Grandma watched safely from indoors,
Excited as us at ninety by the show.
The frost got thicker and our breath cloudier,
But we noticed neither, nor cared.
The efflorescent rockets and earth-shaking
Bangers took us with them,
Until the last one finally died.
Tired feet were dragged home after goodnights,
Thoughts of explosions and tinsel colours
Filling our heads.
Fireworks never last long enough for children.
Neither do grandparents.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 21 July 2011

Great memory, how lucky for you to cherish it in such a beautiful way! How lucky am I to have found it, felt as I was in the middle of the party. Heart warming, thank you!

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Pamela Lutwyche 31 December 2008

Hi Kev, this brought back so many memories for me as I was reading your poem. I truly loved it. I could actually see the children’s faces, being my cousins and friends from long ago, all lit up from the different colours. Thanks for the memories.

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David Threadgold 09 October 2008

Hi Kevin. Great memories brought back to mind both the fireworks and the grandparents. a very well done 10/10 Regards Dave T

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Original Unknown Girl 09 October 2008

I love this poem! It is so full of detail and colour and positively bursts on the page like a true firework. The real beauty in it though lies in the emotion, the little bits of personal information about the grandparents and the scrummy food. I can see the whole scene in my minds eye - terrific penning. HG: -) xx

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