Blindness Poem by rowan ahmed
Blindness
you make me cry
then you wipe my tears
you sit trying to console me
after you feed my fears
i try to put it in words
but no one really hears
words with no sense
that a shakey voice smears
like the whispering cry of mayday
into deft dying ears
consequences of my weakness
on my dull world congeals
while the pain of lonliness
my soul sears
a heart despratly cying
with loud sad cheers
how can blindness the inlightened steers?
Some don't realize what thy have got till it is gone, the poem is the makings of a good poet keep writing....regards PS I promp you
very good way of expressing your own agonies, it's just great........
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5/16/2024 9:08:37 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Very good poem for me. I enjoyed reading it. It is full of anquish and sadness. I love the line : like the whispering cry of mayday into deft dying ears...... I will read and review all of your poems. Thanks for the invite! J. L.