Black Actions Poem by Alyssa Lippi

oh my! WHY U DIDNT KEEP ON WRITING....it was such a good flo with perfect words..... pls....try to write more here, , , , it's such a good piece...

wow that was amazing it seemed almost perfect good job!

that was really b; lack..

10/10, it's really dark, and yet it shows it's not all you that's dark, the is perfectly written in ways of 'Goth' poetry, and a good poem in any other poetry genre

Black actions...deceitful manifestations from the heart. So well penned, captivating read! ; D

now THIS is something that people would add to there favorites! ! well done! !

I really enjoyed this one. Seems like you put a lot into it.10/10

A very impressive poem written with almost life like action, you drew me into the poem as a good poet will do. You did an outstanding job on structure and flow. I give you a 10. Verrrrrry Goooood. Your friend Lynn

you got such good comments on this..what else can i say.. but as you asked for it i can only say that..keep writing..'coz i know that the best is yet to come and for me it's too close but not that..