Bim Bam Boom Poem by Aric Beers

Bim Bam Boom



Jumpy, jittery, bouncing in joy
Happy as a kid with a new toy
Laughing, leaping, smiling so wide
As this joy just can't hide
Flying and gliding and feeling so good
Just the way we all know we should
Singing, soaring, starting to fly
I'm so happy and I don't know why

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2013

i was drawn to the title, enjoyed the lift of it, enjoyed the rhyming. might i suggest you stop taking those hallucinogens? thanks for sharing. my only complaint is that you used flying/fly twice. :)

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 31 August 2013

cool write, nicely written

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