Thrashes and bash
Your thoughts rash
Creep into heart
Bang with crash
Explode in feelings
To create commotions
Heart rises healing
Super flow emotions
When the dusts settle
A pang like thing
Increase and rattler
Make me sing
The songs of rubble
Lyrics of pains
Odes of trouble
Epics of remains
The star which awakes
Tide of agony
With quietness slakes
Marring my destiny
I revolve around
Round the axis
Never on ground
Land and relaxes
without the knowlege of the poet there exploded something and he started revolving around his love.good idea and good comparison.
Caught unawares as always is the way these things work. Ëxplode in feelings', the things is to make the fireworks keep exploding.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A healthy choice in words and i really admire that.. We are going to get along just fine i rate this at 25