Big Bang Poem by akram saqib

Big Bang

Rating: 3.6


Thrashes and bash
Your thoughts rash
Creep into heart
Bang with crash


Explode in feelings
To create commotions
Heart rises healing
Super flow emotions

When the dusts settle
A pang like thing
Increase and rattler
Make me sing

The songs of rubble
Lyrics of pains
Odes of trouble
Epics of remains

The star which awakes
Tide of agony
With quietness slakes
Marring my destiny

I revolve around
Round the axis
Never on ground
Land and relaxes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sad _eyes 13 April 2009

A healthy choice in words and i really admire that.. We are going to get along just fine i rate this at 25

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Identification Accepted 12 April 2009

loved reading this 10

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Shams Tahir 08 April 2009

without the knowlege of the poet there exploded something and he started revolving around his love.good idea and good comparison.

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 06 April 2009

Caught unawares as always is the way these things work. Ëxplode in feelings', the things is to make the fireworks keep exploding.

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ata khan 05 April 2009

Bravo! Akram Thanks for Sharing 10+

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