“piece” Of Mind Poem by akram saqib

“piece” Of Mind

Rating: 4.4


The entire energies do we waste
With great care and much haste
On discovery and invention
To enhance the human tension
All the weapons and device
Sins evils and much vice
The fatal bombs, rattles bombs
We rear the cattle bombs
Vicious circle of the power
Expands like the waiting hour
Wish for monopoly and force
Engulfing peace expanding course
Say no to all such deed
Pay only a little heed
Invent devices loving and kind
Just by using a “piece” of mind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 21 March 2009

wowwwwwwwwwww i liked your 'piece of mind' -10 anjali

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Aijaz Asif 23 March 2009

if only we start using our piece of mind in a positive thoughts tahn there will be a peace in this world...a very good and thought provoking write, thanks for sharing 10+++ rgds asif

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~ Jon London ~ 26 March 2009

Peaceful lines spoken with soft tones brings to mind an overwhelming feeling of peace my brother, excellent piece 10 keep up the good work Bravo! !

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Nice compostion dear friend :) yes, the huiman race is much on the destructive course, and less on the GROWTH one; though the latter one contributes Infinitely to the UNIVERSAL PEACE. - shree

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Metin Sahin 10 April 2009

wonderful.go on in this way.but be free in verse..write from yoı ur inside

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 August 2017

Invent devices loving and kind Just by using a “piece” of mind..such a great message indeed my dear poet. yes we waste our energy in inventing and we destroy............. thank you for this great message. it is very true in todays context. tony

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Rabia Butt 10 December 2011

nice poem thought is very unique

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Fade Ward 12 June 2009

Dear Akram, A good message through a beautiful poem, very relevant in these strife-torn times piece be with you give u ten for that one

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 29 April 2009

Dear Akram, A good message through a beautiful poem, very relevant in these strife-torn times. Yes, unless man learns to heed the call of his heart and soul, his exercise of mind for inventions and discoveries, sans an ethical base and an ethos of humanity, carries him nowhere except on a path of doom. Love, my dear friend.

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Silent Speaker 28 April 2009

I love how this poem is so different. Its so unique and distinctive. Well done! ! !

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