Often I think
About you
When the feelings of love
Come over above
I can not think
And only blink
My eyes with awe
Which come to a thaw
I think about the days
When do we play
On the ocean’s bay
I sob for the days
Which often raze?
The pillar of strength
Which was a labyrinth
I sob for the past
That could not last
Left me all alone
To keep on bemoan
On the days of the past
This could not last
Goodness Saqib you are superb.You don't need my comments specially this poem.It is marvelous.
It is a nice rhythm and flow. Easy to read and pleasant. Sentimental also. I like.
hello baloch! thanks for the comment..... your poems are extremely good and poignant write indeed with nice rhythmic flows which felts like a water fall...keep it up with the great work....10+++ rgds asif
your emotions drift across the page and straihgt into the heart..poignant write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
zabardast! ! ! great flow Thanks for sharing