Break, Brake Or Barak Poem by akram saqib

Break, Brake Or Barak

Rating: 3.8


HERE ARE LEADERS
THERE ARE LEADERS
WORLD IS FILLED
WITH THEIR READERS
SOME ARE THE SHAMS
OTHERS JUST NAMES
OFTEN THEY BREAK
PLAY DUCKS DRAKE
WITH THEIR LANDS
TO EARN THE RANDS
MANY PULL BRAKES
AND ESCAPES
TO THE ALLIEN LANDS
LET US SEE
WHAT WILL BE
ROLE OF THE
REVEREND BARAK
BRAKE OR BREAK?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Shanazar 30 March 2009

Nice depiction of attitude of the so-called leaders, see the spellings of'Pull'. Thanks

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 30 March 2009

The world waits to see..but it is about us uniting and that is his fundamental message. Yet many are still waiting on this once upon time super power. I think the real message of the USA is that we can all change and if we believe; then yes we can! I like the use of the duck..drakes..it has a deeper meaning. Topical.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 29 March 2009

Collecting the money and running happens to only subcontinent leaders.........good write..........

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 29 March 2009

Collecting the money and running happens to only subcontinent readers.........good write..........

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