Bevy Of Girls Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Bevy Of Girls

Rating: 4.4


Bevy of girls on a fast food chain
Sixty years old as per their mane
Some are plump and there’s one in cane
I smile as I see they are still vain

They are hot grandmas with some high heels
Their bags and their purses and expensive wheels
From the looks of it they made it this far
All successful and happy with each passing hour

I can’t help but wonder what about me
Would I be as contented would I be in glee
Would I still laugh out loud loud and free
What would happen to me if I reach sixty

I will do crazy things I will savor each moment
Surprises and trials I will find what they meant
I will welcome changes I’ll have an open mind
What will make me sad I will leave behind

Bevy of girls on a fast food chain
Sixty years old as per their mane
But this I tell you in the coming years
I will be with my own bevy of girls

Wednesday, April 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: FRIENDSHIP
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was waiting for my son as he plays
and I saw this group of women, and my mind drifted, my lips smiled.....and now this poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 December 2015

I can’t help but wonder what about me Would I be as contented would I be in glee Would I still laugh out loud loud and free What would happen to me if I reach sixty Futuristic thoughts.... . very interesting and sometimes funny lines which made me smile thank you. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 13 May 2015

Your poem 'Bevy Of Girls' is a pleasure to read. Happy and contented women, young or old alike, are like happy flowers that dance and sway with breeze, hum with the bees and babble like a brook. Thanks for the notes

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 September 2014

Attractive title and super poem on fashionable grannys. Pls do review my latest poem too

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Hazel Durham 18 August 2014

Bubbling with energy and the joy of living, so beautifully expressed!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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