Between You And Me Poem by Indira Renganathan

Between You And Me

Rating: 5.0


I am too short
You are too tall
Your friends laughed at
The matchless match
There upon you've started wavering

Parents resolve to solve
Give us a weighing balance
We put our hearts on each side
Ha...you're relieved.... also I'm

It's just between you and me
Like zephyr and flower

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 29 October 2021

Fantastic, In the end made for each other. Fabulous short love story.

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Chinedu Dike 30 October 2021

A beautiful creation elegantly put together. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, Madam.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 October 2021

A beautiful love story so succinctly and wonderfully crafted. Cleverly written. Top Marks! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 October 2021

A beautiful love story so succinctly and wonderfully crafted. Cleverly written. Liked the ultimate stanza.

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Bharati Nayak 01 November 2021

So beautiful and sweet poem---When love joins hearts all differences vanish!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 October 2021

Amazing! The last line made me smile!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 October 2021

As always, so brilliantly penned dear Indira Ma'm. A pleasure to read.......5 stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 October 2021

A wonderful poem of matchless match. Always opposites and contrasts match well

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 October 2021

My parents were like that and they were married for 59 years Bravo!

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