Betrayed Trust Poem by Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor

Betrayed Trust

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Like raindrops from the sky
So are you
Leaving me to hold to my lost self
Liking you to a wheel speeding on earth
The greatest of all mistakes
Upthrust toes led by heavy shoulders
The oil does not get watered
A life you owe me cannot be laid

Like the showering of the rain
So do your lips move
Even grasses are at fear of holding your feet
Seeing someone as you are
Returns the fear of cats for dogs
Like sparrows depend on the air
Eagles on their wings
Though you are my palm
I do not know the lines on you
I rather believe a fiend than you

Sunday, May 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,fears,hatred
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 20 August 2018

Though you are my palm I do not know the lines on you I rather believe a fiend than you.fears, pain, suffering, betrayal described in picturesque terms.. thank u dear poet.. tony

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My pleasure Sir. I'm grateful. Reading most of my poems will really help. Especially me. Criticism builds a writer

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Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor

Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor

Umuchu in Auguata L.G.A of Anambra state
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