Beneath Me Poem by Old Teenage Poems

Beneath Me



I wished that you would see me
in more than the usual way
Wished that you would see
underneath the paleness of my skin
and
beyond the green in my eyes
beneath
My shallow lights and empty shades

Wished
That you would look at me
and see
not what I seem
But what I see

Until I realized
I see none of that in you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

Love this nice composition.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 March 2008

beneath this writes is.................engraved with beauty.

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Amanduh Zallarrr 07 January 2008

i really like this piece. : ] keep writing. ~frozenbeauty

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