Below The Ocean Floor Poem by louis rams

Below The Ocean Floor



Below the ocean floor

I see another world below the ocean floor
Where peace reigns forever more.
There is no hunger, no despair, just the love that people share.
There are no wars, no bitterness, no hate
Just a world full of faith.
There is no different languages, no different beliefs
Nothing to create " despair " or " grief ".
What if a world such as this could exist?

Where for every question there is an answer
And politicians did not exist!
Wouldn't it be a heavenly bliss!
Where suggested changes are madeand voted" by the people
for the people ""

Instead of money- people would barter for goods needed.
Everyone would work and contribute their share
To live in peace - it's only fair!
© L. RAMS 083018

Thursday, August 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 02 September 2018

Sounds like Utopia, except underwater! And politicians did not exist- - well, not the crooked ones, anyway! Hopefully, we can do more than dream of possibilities- - we can go about quietly affecting change, as the opportunity presents itself. Who knows how much difference even a poem such as this can make? Well-written!

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Captain Cur 31 August 2018

Ah! The one two punch! Below the ocean floor lies honesty and truth. A great write Louis, let us all work in our own ways for a more productive and helpful life, to share with our families, friends and all those in need.

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Louis Rams 31 August 2018

it is beautiful when we can dream of possibilities

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 August 2018

Such a splendid write, Louis.......................................

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Louis Rams 31 August 2018

thank you so much for viewing and commenting

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