Before Old Age Poem by gershon hepner

Before Old Age

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Young beauty forces love, and that’s a rape,
there’s far more willingness in middle-age
when lovers do not look for an escape,
together trapped before old age can rage.

It was Donne, in the elegy 'The Autumnal, ' who observed that 'Young Beauties force our love, and that's a Rape.'

11/26/05

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Lamont Palmer 27 November 2005

Nice one, Gershon. As I mentioned to someone else, we formalists and near-formalists must stick together. Stricture, a sense of meter, and music still handily carry the day in poetry.

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