Beautiful Stranger Poem by JR Cuyam

Beautiful Stranger



Your cute and innocent smile
Makes me forget who I am
And you make me fragile
You make me lose my mind

Beautiful as the moon
Radiant as the dawn
Everything about you is bizarre
You are as wonderful as you are

Your eyes, your figure are fetchin'
I can't conceal that I am meltin'
Oh where did you come from? Stranger
Did you just fall from the sky? I wonder.

Thursday, August 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 August 2015

a lad's passion on a maiden is seen in this poem. good

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 August 2015

Short and sweet drop! ! Love is flowing thick from lines. Liked it.

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Grace Galeon 23 August 2015

hhhmm who's the stranger? haha

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Rachel Butler 20 August 2015

A youths write with the power of the now! Good write

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nice one hummmmmmmmmm.

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Paul Sebastian 20 August 2015

You are so captivated by her looks and you have penned beautifully your feelings. You could even make a beautiful song out of it. Happy for you.

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Sanjukta Nag 20 August 2015

the poem depicted beautifully how a lover's mind works... simple yet heart touching.

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