Four Minute Song Poem by JR Cuyam

Four Minute Song

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Our relationship's like a piece of music
We captivate each other with melodies mystic

With our love we create such blissful rhythm
And with gladness we overflow to the brim

We play our verses of love beautifully
Harmonized with sensations so lovely

With our sweet choruses we got each other transfixed
Unaware of what's going to happen next

Then something's wrong in the bridge part
It suddenly, breaks my heart

A sad ending begins, this is so wrong
Our love's fading as quickly as a four minute song

Monday, September 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raymond Farrell 29 September 2015

It is the way life is and this poem describes matter of life well.

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Paul Warren 29 September 2015

Sometimes love is only one way or an infatuation? Nice one.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 29 September 2015

Nice poem.Keep sharing Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Kassem Oude 29 September 2015

Nice poem, well rhyming!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 September 2015

sorry about the ending of a love affair..... there'll be others. Keep your pen at work.. Regards Sally

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Sonali Ganguly 01 April 2016

nice song sung through poetic words

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Tracy Craighead 06 December 2015

this is lovely, love can be so much like beautiful music, both sad and romantic

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 October 2015

Very nice expressions through muse. However, it raises a doubt. Whether it is love or it is just an infatuation?

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Sranisha Francis 01 October 2015

Very good expressions.........

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Lorraine Colon 30 September 2015

I like your comparing love to a song. Sadly, many loves come into our lives and end too briefly, like a four minute song. But these songs are just preparing you for the grand symphony..... that will go on and on. You already have your seat in the theatre of life; now it's just a matter of time. May the next music you hear be written just for you. I enjoyed your poem..... a nice play on words.

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