Like A Summer Breeze Poem by JR Cuyam
Like A Summer Breeze
This simple rhyme I arranged, let me recite
I made it for you, I wrote it last night
it's kinda crazy and sounds like thrash
But I am hoping it can stir up such a fuss
You're very kind, loving and sweet yo'
Your pleasant disposition is like a hue
And it's shining through the night
Dazzling like a great light
Like a soft wind that brings solace
Ever soothing like a summer breeze
You came and swept away my dullness
Your weird ways have put real smile on my face
I believe that there is no coincidence
That things don't just come into existence
So, there's a purpose why we became friends
My heart is telling me of what it comprehends
There's more than meets the eye, more than we can see
So let's open our hearts up to the possibility
Though this is just an art inked out by a pen
It comes from my heart- it is genuine.
Enjoyable poem that identifies a relationship between to friends and shows how important it is to share our love and thoughts.
An expressive words, and nice depiction, you said that you're hoping it can stir up such a fuss, actually it does. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Its a nice poem...totally expresses what friendship means...its open boundaries where a friend can share all his thoughts with another....liked it...keep it up..
nicely written....expresses the bond of friendship....well done..keep it up...
Your poem seems to be more romantic than friendly, but it's very enjoyable, depicts what friends should be like. Just watch your spelling. Great imagery! It's rhythm is like that of a rap song! Very good! Thank you for sharing and also for commenting on my poetry. RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This poem leaves me with a few questions. It refers to buddies, but it sounds romantic. I would not approve of using the 'A' word on this site. Otherwise, I liked the flow as it built upon the subject matter.