Be Concerned With Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Be Concerned With

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We have no time to watch
Each pulse is to be lived with an attempt to catch
Somebody may find it enterprising and as heaven
Rest all may be living under fear and not behaving even

Lot more to learn and lot more to loose
It is to be picked up and rightfully choose
What are we going to do with this precious moment?
Later on no time will be left to resent

God has given us beautiful earth to live
Full trust and dedicate to her to believe
That she is was and will always be for us
It has to be matter of great concern with trust

So rise early and face the day bravely
See the sun shine before it is late in early
Rest you all may follow generously
Keep pace with time and carry out continuously

Not to worry about what will be next?
It will certainly be in favor and best
It may prove sometime as an acid test
But believe in self and be assured of about the rest

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2012

nice! carmen river1 hour ago nice! you could probably improve the flow with a few more edits but keep it up! nice job! Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2012

Isabelle Warby1 hour ago Keep writing! ! : D

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2012

We have no time to watch Each pulse is to be lived with an attempt to catch

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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