Barathrum Poem by Crimson Love

Barathrum

Rating: 5.0


I've fallen past time
I've fallen past sound,
I remain encased in this abyss,
I fight for nothing,
my fist remains clenched,
Holding on to the pain, That makes me bleed,
Razor blades hug me close,
They fall as Crimson drops,
In this abyss, I found you,
yet fell past you all the same,
When I made the choice to jump,
I should have contemplated,
The nothingness of your void.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ace Of Black Hearts 13 November 2011

A void is endless, and even though the fall feels like eternity. Soon you will find that void was just a very deeply dug hole. When you land is in your control. Anger can be both a step forward and backwards. It all depends on the existing factors. Bravo crimson, keep them coming.

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Alex Manson 13 November 2011

very lovely, my dear...<3 this is incredible

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Unwritten Soul 12 November 2011

Fabulous, i like this one very much...it sound so dark and raise to be bright and it fly n be a star, shine with crimson shine...a good inspiration for star gazers... :) That a cool and cooool write crimson, One of my favorite of your collection_Unwritten Soul

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Abdallah Gamal 12 November 2011

OmG! Oh oh oh I like it, it's inspiring! ! ! ! ! ! !

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