Battered And Bruised Poem by Crimson Love

Battered And Bruised

Rating: 5.0


battered and bruised,
Tossed away, so often used,
Tattooed across the mind, blaming you as the accused,
Crying for help, but your whispers fall on deaf ears,
Gone... forever drowned in crimson tears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 04 November 2011

'battered and bruised, Tossed away, so often used, ' Are the the shocker? Are you the stunner? ah, cripes! what a mourning elegy is this! My dad said we cannot express our love in words when I was too young. But now you are proving hi wrong by expressing your profound grief! Hey H for Holy is the rating i give to your poem. c for crimson, L for love, b and L for best of luck! :) :)

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Heather Eldridge 15 October 2011

powerful, riveting and gripping this moved me, it stirred something within me Thank you

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