Ballistic Poem by Wandering Scarlet

Ballistic

Rating: 5.0


head upside down
'im about to drown
drown in depression
its my obsession
beat myself up
i never give up
smack
crack
harder
HARDER
scratch till i bleed
pain is what i need
cant get enough
need to be more rough
my body is numb
my head is dumb
man i hate myself
now i run into this shelf
now my face is bleeding
on pain my body is feeding
slam my head on the wall
i hit like a rag doll
fall on the floor
whack my head on the door
i loose consciousness
i'm trapped in blindness
im going ballistic

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Austin Wheeler 02 January 2010

That sounded like me on New Year's Eve. Well minus the drowning. Unless you count drowning in meaningless substance as drowning. i havent come across any poet quite like you and thats a compliment I can relate too since I havent come across a poet quite like myself either. It seems like you have a knack for poppin out the classics quickly tho.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 18 September 2007

That poem spoke to me... I loved the poem AND the title. They were both excellent. Great work! Keep writing.

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Evaughn Gray 19 August 2007

wow that was a very good poem i loved it..kinda scary though but n a funny kinda way..~hazel

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