Ballad 10 Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ballad 10

Rating: 5.0


swifter than lightning, a mere sweetness need require
in Nerine sleep, a chariot drawn by Chardin's Desire
so deep as her gloss and newness shall last
why muse on Onyx that mellow had the past?

throw off thy Tracelium with glad disdain
and leave thy dishonest and worries behind
still round the romantic scene weaves her spells
for in this barren waste a dear Heart dwells

feel how City of Ayutthaya whose frenzied gaze
has asked in vain the Love's benignant rays
since this sacred scene an Eden empowered
at Fate's command the hurricane slumbered

go then ye warm-gleaming joys of a day!
calm will she bend me to Time's sparkle way
hark! she hear the wheels rolling
Adieu! ye peace once gently praising

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 04 November 2009

'Bend me to time's sparkle way ' lovely phrasing used throughout - - 10 Fay

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 November 2009

Good efforts made to write these ballads

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Raj Nandy 04 November 2009

As requested I have read all the Ballads today! I can see that you are on a great writing spree! Good creative writing! 10! You may like to add foot notes in some places for better appreciation by the readers. Best Wishes, -Raj

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 05 November 2009

i have now finished commenting on all of your latest 10 ballads. They are all good!

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Vinod Kumar 21 November 2009

Real flow of a Ballad, Nice job dear poet 10+

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Catrina Heart 09 November 2009

wow my dear your poetry is spell binding....awesome work...well crafted poem...10

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 06 November 2009

Beautiful poetry my friend....each ballad challenges the other, they just get better.

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Omar Ibrahim 06 November 2009

aye! fill me with poetry! old but modern.....at the past but now.....english but indonesian...God bless you!

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Obinna Eruchie 05 November 2009

All the ballads you have penned are wonderful, the lyrics are adorable.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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