Paul Elenora

Rookie - 161 Points (3rd March)

Aye! A Dream - Poem by Paul Elenora

I shivered profusely
As the two hefty looking
Looked at me with fury
I wished I was DEAD

I fixed my Gaze continuously
At the light bulb
Hanging by the
Old wooden ceiling
And silently said my PRAYERS

Craach! ! !
They have a gun O_O
I shivered
As they walked closer
Then I tried runing away
But it seems
I was stuck there FOREVER

GOD help me! ! !
I silently said
As I shot my eyes
awaiting my persecutors
I hoped

LENNY! ! !
I shivered as I opened my eyes.
Sheepishly she stared at me
As she stood by the bedside
Its time to wake up she said.
Aha! It was just a DREAM

Comments about Aye! A Dream by Paul Elenora

  • Gold Star - 9,325 Points G. Akanji Olaniyi (9/13/2015 11:29:00 AM)

    It is a miraculous dream and a lovely composition! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lily Mccambridge (11/7/2013 6:19:00 PM)

    Ooh my God! ! ! ! ! ! You are meant to see me. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, November 8, 2013

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