Awoke Poem by Jennifer Alejandra

Awoke

Rating: 4.5


What once was so perfect
Fell apart in front of our noses
We had no more choices
Both our powerful voices
Gone.
Our vocal chords wrecked
From all the yelling and screaming

Pushing and pulling until we both finally broke
The pain was too much when my mind finally awoke
He said 'just let go, it's not worth all this pain'
I said 'my heart's totally broken so I'll listen to you brain'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris G. Vaillancourt 09 May 2014

Your use of rhythm here is wonderful. Very vivid and deep poem

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