I Don'T Know What To Write Poem by Jennifer Alejandra

I Don'T Know What To Write

Rating: 5.0


I don't know what to write
I don't know what to say
It usually comes to me when I turn on the light
But not today 

I don't know if I should talk about what I did yesterday 
Or talk about the way you told me you didn't want to stay 
Or maybe I should mention that you dumped me in the rudest way 

But I don't know whats right anymore
I don't know what to live for 

Should I turn of this light 
That lightens up my night

Maybe I Should dropp this black pen 
That you gave me Ben 
The one that helps me write 
Even when I feel all uptight 

Maybe I should switch my hobby 
Maybe I could go smoke in the lobby 

But maybe I shouldn't 
What if I couldn't 

Writings my life
I'm done with that knife

I do what I do
Not just for you
I think of me too

So I won't give up
I'll put down this cup

I'll try it again
Thank you Ben

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 18 July 2011

Jennifer, you can write about anything that catches your attention and inspires you: flowers, mother nature in general, a baby crying or smiling. Old people holding hands and walking slowly down the streets. Honestly speaking, I find inspiration everywhere! In the day I think Poetry and in the night I dream Poetry! I am a humble living poet always trying to inspire the World. If check my page whenever time permits you will see that I write about almost everything, more about love than anything else! Your words give you away and clearly shows your great TALENT! Poetry runs in your veins! Great write! Keep inspiring the world! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Aqeb Benazir 11 July 2011

nice work! ! not too heavy, not too light, but moderate...simple and neat. your rhymes are very to-the-point and it sings well with the flow! !

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Urshula Davis 09 July 2011

This is nice so honest! I see you putting somebody on blast but hey thats the art of poetry!

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