Awaiting Her Valentine. Poem by Fay Slimm

Awaiting Her Valentine.

Rating: 5.0


In a hidden golden land
Beyond the rainbow, standing
Only a hearbeat away,
There lives a smitten lady
Who looks forlorn, love-sick eyes
Turn longingly to search skies
From whence her Valentine departs
On winter clouds to bring his heart.

She, only half alive, breath
Expiring, sighs, love's deathly
Pallor covers softest cheeks
As time stands still. She meekly
Waits, sure her Knight will arrive.

Such hunger for his heart, alive
And beating strong will abate
Desire. All will be sated
When he comes. True love will be
United, and she set free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 08 February 2009

Fay, very beautiful expectation of the prince...10....... Tsira

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 February 2009

They'll be lining up after such sweet lines fay.. :) 10

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Fiona Davidson 08 February 2009

This really touches my heart Fay...so beautiful...thank you..Fi...10++

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Tia Maria 08 February 2009

Oh Fay, only you could write this way... another very special message of eternal love ... and thank you, I went into my own little fairytale :) xx

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Kris Smith 08 February 2009

That was a beautiful piece of romantic verse Fay hope he arrives safely and on time 10 ++ Chris

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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