Autumn Poem by Katinka Havermans

Autumn

Rating: 5.0


Golden trees, leaves rustling
Shorter days, colder nights, darkening of days
Autumn has finally arrived

© KH

Wednesday, October 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 11 October 2018

IF I have something to tell, I oftentimes write a message, but you don't allow readers send messages to you, so that's why I write my words here, I am so sorry. Best regards, Sylvia Frances Chan.

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Katinka Havermans 13 October 2018

Thank you for your comments Sylvia. I don't know about that message thing, I don't think I have it I'm not sure.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 October 2018

...................................and in most of Dutch Autumns Indian Summer will be coming, surely................................... What I wanna say is: Haiku must be with 5-7-5 syllables, otherwise it is no haiku. For example: I have taken your Autumn Subject: Golden leaves rustling, shorter days, cold nights' starting, autumn at our doors. Thank you for sharing your loveliest Autumn poem, Katinka. I have truly enjoyed.10+++++

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Katinka Havermans 13 October 2018

Yes Sylvia you would be right if it was in Japanese, but in English you don't have to keep to the 5-7-5 rule. And because I don't write in Japanese.... I can keep a free-form Haiku if I like to. Just look it up if you don't believe me.

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