Assurance Poem by Julia Pascual

Assurance



Just relax
Lie down
Worry not
And don’t frown

Stay with me
And be calm
Don’t panic
Touch my palm

I assure you
It’ll be fine
Close your eyes
We’ll stop time

Until it’s over
Then we shall see
The result
Is it you and me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madelene Calalo 14 September 2009

i like the message of the poem.. hehe.. it's very simple yet meangful..

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Danzen D. 12 September 2009

Too many people have been hurt too much to fear how it feels to trust in full...but always believe in full assurance and devotion, for in these you will learn a lot. Because these two are the foundations of every relationship that not only lasts, but lasts beautifully. Great poem, keep writing!

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Nashy Lamen 10 September 2009

You can never have that certain answer.. There'd always be doubts... Yet it's not bad at all to anticipate and assure something... Keep expressing your emotions to creative writes... :)

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Lorena Cruz 08 September 2009

assurance about you being together? ? hmm.. for me assurance in love is just an illussion.. for there will always be rocks and cliffs along the way.. but still people seeks for it i guess its because of fear of pain and fear itself...

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