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As Desire Carries On...

I am who I am
Despite who you think I am
Still there's this unsettling war between us
A notion my heart can't ignore
Indeed you are a man of destined fame
Your philosophy speaks to me like a sea of violins
As I dance upon the shore
That fills your passionate eyes
This perpetual suicide that is love terrifies me
Your life is brilliant
I should be so jealous
But my affections aren't bitter
As you sit there smoking your cigar
Composing whatever it is that shall astound me next
I wonder if the universe will turn upside down
And watch me fall into the abyss of pure joy
No need to be afraid
Beauteous Victory has nine lives
A woman with a screaming conscience
One that screams extremely loud
The future is uncertain
Whenever that may be.

Submitted: Thursday, January 09, 2014
Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014


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  • Ed Nigma (2/6/2014 9:58:00 PM)

    My favorite lines Your philosophy speaks to me like a sea of violins As I dance upon the shore. Very potent description. I also notice a resounding theme in many of your poems which is chaos and the fear of love coupled with that unexpected uncertainty and I like that.

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  • Sekharan Pookkat (1/10/2014 12:32:00 PM)

    bitter love and jealousy
    is not fair like smoking cigar
    both weaken our heart and soul
    and spoils life up and down

  • * Sunprincess * (1/9/2014 11:13:00 PM)

    ...........a wonderful write b.v.. the imagery the universe is stunning...keep penning..

  • Poetheart Morgan (1/9/2014 8:46:00 PM)

    I love your wild way.... so sincere... I like that very much.

  • Sekharan Pookkat (1/9/2014 5:19:00 PM)

    I wonder if the universe will turn upside down! good to read

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