Suicide. Poem by Lisa French

Suicide.

Rating: 4.0


Suicide, suicide
Your presence is near
Suicide, suicide
I wish you were here
Suicide, suicide
Take me away
Suicide, suicide
Please make it today
Suicide, suicide
An answer, for me
Suicide, suicide
I need to escape, be free
Suicide, suicide
I’ve had too much
Suicide, suicide
Take me, do your touch
Suicide, suicide
Leave the rest behind
Suicide, suicide
You’re all over my mind
Suicide, suicide
Let me pass in peace
Suicide, suicide
I need to release

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kitty Vincent 11 January 2012

YOUR POEM MAKING SKILLS BLOW.. PLEASE KILL YOURSELF NOW YOU ARE A DISGRACE TO THE HUMAN RACE!

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Anonymous 03 September 2019

You are a terrible excuse for a human being. Take your own advice.

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Anonymous 03 September 2019

Take your own advice.

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I am confused as to what poetic value is upheld by the poem?

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Sarah Wayne. 06 March 2024

But first and foremost, nevertheless, but not, needless to say I'm confused. What value is upheld in your comment?

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Sarah Wayne. 06 March 2024

Work personal opinion, I think it's absolutely outstanding. I'm pleased to use it. You've never had any thoughts. You wish you could go to sleep and not wake up in the depths ofdepression

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Wade Pontius 19 May 2023

If all you in the comment are going to act this way you should all kill yourself you should be ashamed

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Ameya Deshpande 09 May 2023

What a wonderful poem & a beautiful write!

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Savita Tyagi 20 April 2023

To first time I read this first place member poem. Lisa you definitely have a way of releasing your tension. It is dramatic and at the same time light and airy.

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Pallavi Tripathi 13 April 2023

Lady lazarus be reborn again.

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