Army Poem by Connie Chambers

Army

Rating: 3.5


A dream changes wat I feel
for this stronge thing I have
no control over
A vistion in your head while
abed and asleep
is all I thought about last night
just laying there
trying to sleep
It just repeats it self
over agian
The same thing plays
in my mind that I
couldnt take it
if you leave me
to join that place of
fighting and war

Ik I couldnt breath at all with you there
an I not knowing if u'd come bac the same or as
a differnt person somone I dont know

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aden orie 01 May 2008

wow thats a really good poem good job keep it up!

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