Are You Ready? Poem by tabasom azadee

Are You Ready?

Rating: 4.5


Are you ready?
Sky is blue
Stars are bright
Flowers are smiling
Butterflys are dancing
And it is the time to leave the earth
We are traveler to a pink dream
Are you ready?
We are invited to freedom’s birthday party
In a place upper than rainbow
Wear your brightest clothes!
We will not allow to clouds
To destroy our imagical party

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 December 2021

generally i get a sense of pleasantness from reading poem though it does have some typos or grammatical errors. I suppose poet's first language is not English. A good effort. bri ;)

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 July 2019

Flowers are smiling Butterflys are dancing And it is the time to leave the earth We are traveler to a pink dream Are you ready? very fine. so much o beauty in ur poem. tony

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Dev Anand 07 October 2017

In a place upper than rainbow Wear your brightest clothes! sky, flowers, etherial...atmosphere..... wondrful imagination. dear poetess. dev

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Saadat Tahir 01 October 2016

a rallying call for the unknown beloved..an ardent and romantic poem that talks of the rainbow and love liked

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V P Mahur 28 February 2014

great Imagery dear TABASOM I liked this cute poem.

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