Adrian Cordova

Rookie (4/17/94 / Lubbock, Tx)

And As I Fall (Follow Up To No Matter What) - Poem by Adrian Cordova

Thoughtless I am, I've chosen you over all else.
I will burn cities for you.
I would sacrifice my innocence for you.
I will never let you give up.
Runaway with me my love, for the world is dead set on keeping us apart.
I will do everything I can, and everything I cannot do, for you.
And if you are to die, you will die in my arms, and no where else.
And in my burning rage, and immortal love, I will storm the very gates of,
Or whatever heaven substiute you have been sent to.
For that is all you deserve, heaven, and nothing less.
And remember as I fall, you are the only reason I rise again, for I am not human, but a beast.
A beast that has been tamed by your beauty, exteral and internal.

For Olette and Alie

Comments about And As I Fall (Follow Up To No Matter What) by Adrian Cordova

  • Silver Star - 3,338 Points Bernard Snyder (7/25/2015 11:07:00 PM)

    So very beautiful. Well penned and very deserving of being chosen. Congrats! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 11,806 Points Savita Tyagi (7/25/2015 10:38:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. Can be interpreted on many levels. It's great with intensity of emotions. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,362 Points Ruby Mostazir (7/25/2015 9:08:00 AM)

    Nice! I love this poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (7/25/2015 6:34:00 AM)

    There is such a word as RUNAWAY, but it is a noun. Here you should have used two words: RUN AWAY.
    Congratulations on having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,105 Points Anil Kumar Panda (7/25/2015 6:06:00 AM)

    It is really a good poem with love flowing thick. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cassandra Nicks (7/10/2010 4:29:00 PM)

    I love this poem. Reminded me of when I felt that way, almost made me cry. Its beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cira Cortes (6/30/2010 9:09:00 PM)

    i really like this one :) 10! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie loNeLY AnGel (4/19/2010 5:34:00 PM)

    i love this poem...... well done.....10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leila Taghavi (4/18/2010 11:14:00 PM)

    You could write the poem lovely. congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynn Glover (4/18/2010 9:28:00 PM)

    Tlhe subject lady of this poem should really be honored, for not many will do all the things your will do for her. Written with authority and plenty of gusto. Good Job. Your friend Lynn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Darlene Styles (4/18/2010 8:48:00 PM)

    love it 10! ! :))) its really nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Claire Hunter (4/18/2010 4:48:00 PM)

    I loved it, it had an the air of an old time romance, kinda reminded me of Romeo & Juliet...10! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sherri Coulter (4/18/2010 1:01:00 PM)

    love is all there is--unless it isn't.10+
    lovely content. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Summer H. (4/18/2010 12:34:00 PM)

    very beautiful :) it touched my heart. its full of emotion and is very deep. i loved it :) well done :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stephanie Robertson (4/18/2010 12:26:00 PM)

    wow... this is really deep, full of emotion and i love it! def. a 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jesse Palma (4/18/2010 11:57:00 AM)

    very touching poem, it's quotable for sure, i gave it a 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 18, 2010

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