Though he's gone, life goes on as before -
The rising sun still announces dawn;
At night the moon paces my bedroom floor,
But now my lonely heart cries out "Begone! "
Without him, seasons still come and go,
Callous Spring comes strewing her flowers;
I pay no heed to Nature's to and fro,
In despair is how my heart spends its hours
Since he left, the joys I knew have flown,
At once, like startled birds taking wing;
The last of the summer's roses have blown,
Not a trace remains of our fairy ring
When he left, he took my hopes and dreams,
Strange, he was so different from the rest;
Now my abandoned heart silently screams
While I stare at the sun like one possessed
O, yes, I know his love was not real!
Just a seed sown by a desperate hand,
Expecting to harvest my heart's ideal -
A castle of dreams built upon quicksand
Well, now there are no seeds left to sow,
But in failure I have found meaning:
Imagined love can never thrive and grow,
And grants harvests too sparse for the gleaning
This is really good - I had to read it twice. The lines: Just a seed thrown by a desperate hand, expecting to harvest my heart's ideal- shows how a lonely heart will grasp at emotional straws, we just need to see it for what it is. A 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Expecting to harvest my heart's ideal - A castle of dreams built upon quicksand well, it, Lora, if you'd stop thinking of.... A castle.....upon quicksand.........maybe you'd actually get one on solid ground. think about it, my friend. [now Bri chuckles to himself, hoping he has rankled Lora a bit] ........... rankled? ? ? i really pulled that word out of my, so to speak; i probably NEVER used it and rarely have heard it used by others! ! to MyPoemList. bri :)