Am I Dreaming? Poem by Lora Colon

Am I Dreaming?

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Tell me again how the flame in your heart
Flares up when before me you kneel
To declare your love in this old-fashioned way,
Am I dreaming, or is this real?

Tell me again how you love me, my dear,
Make my heart and my senses reel!
And I, in my rapture, can only inquire:
Am I dreaming, or is this real?

Tell me again how the rose has no beauty
And its fragrance has no appeal
When compared to me - O, tell me again!
Am I dreaming, or is this real?

Tell me again how my eyes burn brighter
Than any light heaven could reveal;
While envious stars complain of their fate,
Am I dreaming, or is this real?

Tell me again how my love holds you captive -
A prisoner loving the ordeal!
And when you kiss me, it's then that I know
I'm not dreaming..... O, yes, this is real!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 06 August 2013

This is lovely Lora, and extremely well written - love the rhyme scheme.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 August 2013

Tell me again how my love holds you captive - A prisoner loving the ordeal the way you finely weave the picture in these lines is amazing.

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Heather Wilkins 07 August 2013

sometimes I think I am thats what love does to us beautiful

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Stephen Katona 15 January 2014

You capture the dream of love magnificently.

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John Brown 14 October 2013

This is a beautiful poem, and very well written.

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Juan Olivarez 22 August 2013

Wonderful Lorraine. Beautiful love poem.

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Kevin Halls 08 August 2013

Your Poemhunters answer to Fifty Shades of Grey! You and Val Doren should get together, you'd go down a storm! WELL DONE.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2013

I am speechless, marveling at the beauty of this beautiful piece. A great poet you are, Lora.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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