An Encounter With The Past... Poem by Patricia Gale
An Encounter With The Past...
My heart stopped a beat
A deep breath to bring me back
You right in front of me within a few feet
No warning, not a clue …. The feeling of a heart attack
Thoughts, memories rushing like a raging river
Fighting with my mind to acknowledge you
Pausing, contemplating on the line I would deliver
I bid all common sense adieu
Deep breath…. Working hard are you?
Stunned, shocked …. Good grief was all you good speak
Your heart began to race, your very breath taken as you turned blue
And then it all started over…. With one small kiss upon my cheek
'An encounter with the past' that can't return. Only the then emotions are always the same. For now...this story seems in progress. Very well written.
Thanks for sharing a beautiful write! I had a similar experience...different result. Please read my poem 'My Son.' Thanks.
I like it, I like it lots. Lovely write subtle and sensual. Delightful to read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
the readers also share the shock, amazement, and delight with the smooth flow of your nice piece...yes the emotion do get revived when we encounter past....
A stunning write lovely lady grabbing the instance with your golden pen a kiss to your cheek for a poem well written 10 Chris
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A Heart stopping moment indeed, The kiss and once more you breathe.. Andy 10