Alternative Place Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Alternative Place



Alternative place

What does it speak?
When you fail to get even tick
Notice on board
You will find no word

All poems go unnoticed
Only selected people get some comments indeed
It becomes futile exercise
When you can feel only surprise

How can we term it literature space?
When there is no trace
For your verses?
It goes with misses

Poets write with zeal
And make it look real
But find no takers
It makes me to roar in laughter

Well it may be tradition
To which we are not putting any question
But it is fact
Why not other poets react to this?

If there are selected people
Who chose to be special individuals?
Well it serves no purpose
One needs to find some alternative place

Alternative Place
Wednesday, October 26, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2016

x welcome Nkosinathi Shezi Add Unlike · Reply · 1 · 5 mins 26 Oct by

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2016

welcome Masoni Peter Unlike · Reply · 1 · 26 Oct

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2016

xMasoni Peter It may be tradition Unlike · Reply · 1 · 2 hrs 26 Oct

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2016

x Nkosinathi Shezi Nkosinathi Shezi Love the poem Unlike · Reply · 1 · 33 mins 26 Oct by

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2016

Ras Stinez Write let the pen write, what the mind ignite, despite the tide, keep up the fight, write and write and write, let no one determine your might, or else to give up you might, the battle is in your hand, pen your arrow, paper your shield, as you match in the field, armed with words, it's not a fart in the wind, despite the likes and comments, it's what your heart covets, keep showing them what you possess, the power, to play with words every hour, with them building a tower, though now sounds sower, taste, detest, retake the test, desist, refuse failure Unlike · Reply · 1 · 15 mins · Edited

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2016

angel thys Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now today

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2016

x Pelo Pelo Makhathini Jo jo jo im blessed to be da part of poetry side let it spk to da people Unlike · Reply · 1 · October 28 at 4: 08pm today by

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2016

welcome David Neomy Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now 6 hours ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2016

xwelcome robin bliss Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now 6 hours ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2016

AJ Lyley Rankali sowi hlk.... Unlike · Reply · 1 · 2 hrs 26 Oct

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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