Alone In The Moment Waiting For You Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Alone In The Moment Waiting For You

Rating: 5.0


Alone in the moment, I could not watch.
Those leaves
that you see are green and move gently
by the wind on the tree's.

Nothing in writing have I left, I leave it all
to my self, speculating.
Can't you see where you live, its not like
what you think, here it was.

He was no king, my crown is intact you can feel.
Red roses once blue, so they stay.
A redoubled effort, feel my hands are free.
Though no one spoke of love so I shan't.

Lift me up while I'm still warm, lay me down.
Bring him up to the top of the hill,
make him watch as the grapes are nearing
their turn.
I will wait here for the official's proclamation.

Alone In The Moment Waiting For You
Wednesday, October 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,moments
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2019

Those leaves are like feathers which carry freedom of hope and dignity of love. Nothing in writing is left as everything is very beautifully felt. Red roses turn into blue coming in contact with sky. Your poetic mind is explored well and this is an excellent poem.10

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Tulsi Shrestha 16 October 2019

Majestic display of words accompanied by metaphors. Intense and powerful expression.

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Kingsley Egbukole 16 October 2019

Sweet and beautiful poem

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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