Alone Poem by Carrol Hoffman

Alone



you left me
after everything i did for you
you left me here with pain thats unberable
you left me with wounds that wont heal with time
i gave you all of me
you gave me nothing of you
you left me with marks that cant be erased
now i fanilly relazied i've been always been alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Evans 13 May 2008

Wow Rose that was sad and made me feel something I've felt before and had forgotten but by reading this poem you made me realize that the only thing we will always have in this world is ourselves and only ourselves

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Brandon Dugan 12 May 2008

good job you really captured me with that it was very sad but moving 5/5

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 12 May 2008

touching sad poem...............

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Carrol Hoffman

Carrol Hoffman

fort.smith arkansas
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