Persian Nightingale


All Saints - Poem by Persian Nightingale

Glacial winds
Winter Sweets
Can't suppress a yawn
Delicate fragrance
Fills the air
Though
They look pale and drawn

We are lulled
By the gentel wind zephyr
It emerges buds
A sure sign
Of serene skies
Sunflower does a little dance
With a spring
In her step
Prize

Burnished celestial orange
Summery smile
A mild fever
The budding friendship
Style

New emotion issues from the heart
The advent of the inner warmth
A momentous event
A serene autumnal mood
Spring in love
Fall's present

(2009/4/3)


Comments about All Saints by Persian Nightingale

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (4/17/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    Simply delicious and delightful. 'burnished celestial orange' 'summery smile' 'spring in love' are images to die for. Loved it all. 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (4/8/2009 1:45:00 PM)

    Spring in love, Fall's present..Yes, when we walk in the sun, we must always be aware
    of the shadows. You are very wise. Beautiful write.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/8/2009 2:30:00 AM)

    like the way u express about nature (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sid John Gardner. (4/5/2009 9:40:00 AM)

    A good representation of natural elements, combined with minkind's awakening to Spring and thoughts of love.Well said my friend,
    Sid. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Maia Padua (4/5/2009 8:52:00 AM)

    lovely piece...SEASONS OF LOVE...
    fragrance is filling the air...
    in a soft, fine-flowing lines
    really a wonderful write...i love this
    goes to my faves
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (4/4/2009 1:47:00 AM)

    wowwwwwwwww a different mood of love
    for a different season. surely +10
    anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M M (4/4/2009 1:42:00 AM)

    a very beautiful poem, distilled with delicacy and soft scents.
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (4/3/2009 12:58:00 PM)

    seasons of love written in a very fine imagery here...lovely end lines and rhymes...10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 548 Points Ency Bearis (4/3/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    awesome poem..spring in love seems so refreshing...nice...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (4/3/2009 11:54:00 AM)

    Spring in love
    Fall's present..
    ..........................
    Simply remarkably, very lovely...10.......

    Best wishes,
    Tsira (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, April 24, 2009


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