$all I Thought Is What I Have Presented$ Poem by Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu

$all I Thought Is What I Have Presented$

Rating: 2.9


I tried to think
but seemed impossible
I felt like an idea was on its way
but before i could grasp it,
my fingers freezed into cristle ice

The sky is clear once again
with the sun sticking the unfortunate
Suddenly the wind sails by,
the dust flys up the sky

My eyes flashed as i began to scribble
the page and
All i thought is what i have presented....!

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Henry Brown 24 July 2009

You have potential Keep penning them Please rate and comment on my 'Get up off your Butt'

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Henry Brown 24 July 2009

You have potential Keep penning them Please rate and comment on my 'Get up off your Butt'

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Henry Brown 24 July 2009

You have potential Keep penning them Please rate and comment on my 'Get up off your Butt'

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Suddenly the wind sails by, the dust flys up the sky.... tht was my fav part n i liked ur poem i'll rate ya as 6.7

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Nkululeko Mdudu 20 April 2009

that is the start of all ventures my friend, it all begins with a thought.

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Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu

Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu

Durban South Africa
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