All At Sea Poem by Vanish Windows

All At Sea

Rating: 5.0


His lips are an ocean
lapping her breast

Her fingertips explore the swell
in his soft throat

His hands navigate
to discover the route

to the mouth of the cave
where his longboat

pushes to make way
and rides the rising tide
to safe haven.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

pushes to make way and rides the rising tide to safe haven. Rachel Ann Butler

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Tj Becker 16 November 2008

This was a fluid smooth flowing poem. Delightful in the wording, you gave us enough to let the imagination fly, I like where mine went haha Great write

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Viola Grey 18 October 2008

sensual without being obvious....nicely done

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