Alankar (Decor)-263 Poem by Indira Renganathan
Alankar (Decor)-263
Nature's Revenge(Blank Verse Sonnet)
Blank Verse Sonnet is:
14 lines
unrhymed iambic pentameter
narrative not lyrical
Nature's Revenge
Two friends were sporting upon the ocean
Hitting the tiny waves with skiing board
While big waves surged high to escape, oh God
Tiny waves were not let even to crawl
'Ocean is a huge beautiful poem
I'm a short cute song'said a tiny wave
'So what, we enjoy hitting you'..friends said
Tiny wave started singing its new song
A song from a forlorn heart which brought
All the big tides together in support
To finish the two transgressors down deep
Nature too has her fierce agony
Infringers can not claim a ownership
Of nature's emotion to sate their heart
The nature of Nature is so wonderful. It becomes clam and peaceful and sometimes it becomes fierce and revengeful. You have so touchingly delineated this sonnet having both sides of Nature. Thank you very much.
So beautiful and so true. We are just too arrogant wanting to claim ownership.
Nature is Mother Goddess. She manifests both in benign and virile forms. The metaphor of the big wave and the tiny wave, so beautifully encapsulated, in this meaningful Sonnet........10
Nature too has her fierce agony Infringers can not claim a ownership Of nature's emotion to sate their heart
Ocean is a huge beautiful poem I'm a short cute song'said a tiny wave......excellently articulated; pleasure to read
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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5/1/2024 9:04:42 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful dialogue with waves on the ocean. A song from the forlorn heart which brought All the big tides together in support To end the transgressors deep down.... Beautiful insightful words. Admirations.