Af01 Tennis Court Poem by Manonton Dalan

Af01 Tennis Court

Rating: 5.0


power strokes skid
on fine grass; beyond
reach of watchful eyes
an oohs! of tennis fans
air pumping hand visible
with a smile, a glory to be

on other side face down
looking for relief; solution
both have craving to win
crowds is waiting patiently
for fantastic serve; pin point
that stuns opponent; walk

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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