Treasure Island

Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

(Iran, Islamic republic of)

Adventures of two captains_ rescue a nice friend


A dark spirit of tremendous power
Was lurking at the entrance to the gate,
His breath spewing hot phosphoric shower
Cathartic white dots dripping from his face.

Our craft was swayed with a solar spiked whip
That harnessed eruditions from the sun,
A fatalistic warning to our ship
That Ashland must be hard fought to be won.

Darkness only dwells where there is no light
Hopelessness and despair its sullen lamp,
Infernal emptiness contains no sight
Palls of pain scurrying within its camp.

Captain A standing bravely by my side
We brushed away our fears and swore our goal,
On a battle plan we must now decide
We are here to rescue our good friend Soul.

Written By Captain cur,
in collaboration with

Submitted: Tuesday, April 09, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 09, 2013

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Hi to all dear readers. these poems are called the chain poems, written by me and my dear friend captain cur. you can read the continue of these works at his page.
Captains A &Cur

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  • Unwritten Soul (4/12/2013 10:37:00 AM)

    The first stanza so Captain Cur... the next just so blend...WOW i just know them well? ? hahahaha
    Loved it especially this line
    -We are here to rescue our good friend Soul-
    how do you both know i am screaming for Help Help! hahahaha
    joking...a sharp and beautiful poem
    and thanks for rescuing my Soul hahaha (joking) _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (4/9/2013 8:17:00 PM)

    Hang on Soul - help is on the way to rescue you from a cathartic poxed, phosphoric breathed, dark spirit.
    A gripping epic is shaping up - nail-biting tension! (Report) Reply

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