Leonard Dabydeen


Addicted - Poem by Leonard Dabydeen

This cool morning breeze

keeps my heart beating with joy:

I smell your perfume.


Comments about Addicted by Leonard Dabydeen

  • Rookie - 3 Points Bert Bell (11/6/2010 2:35:00 PM)

    You're so good at writing these powerful laconic poems. Splendid work.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Siddharth Singh (3/29/2010 1:47:00 AM)

    A beautiful and mystic write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (3/23/2010 9:55:00 PM)

    caressing comfort
    in the cool morning breeze
    like an infant's touch (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pradyumna Jyotir (3/19/2010 12:15:00 PM)

    Sir....a young friend of mine said that there should be an element of mystery in every creation......and today I cannot agree with him more.....What is this perfume? Is it the perfume of the cool morning breeze...or the perfume of someone you know.....No I don't want to know the answer....I prefer basking in the mystery.......and the cool morning breeze. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 16, 2010



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