Acronym For Your Name Poem by Bilal Raja
Acronym For Your Name
Bewildered In Life And Love,
Something’s will never change
My sad and lonely existence
It’s bound to remain the same
Believing In Lie After Lie,
You led me further astray
Our relationship could never grow
When you were always away
Because I’ve Loved And Lost,
By the saying I’m appalled
That, its better to have loved and lost
Then to have never loved at all
Broken Innocence Left A Legacy,
Turning a child into a ghost
Life through my blood shot eyes
Now to that lets all toast
Being Isolated Leaves Anyone Lonely,
Without a lover or a friend
Alone in this dark room
This is where my story ends
i love it all :) you are very good at what you do please keep it up
gr8t job again. one lil thing.. i noticed it in my own work, sometime following the 'rule', rhyming patterns etc, take away froom emotion and replaces the stronger feeling with the rhyme, dont let that stop you from reachign the peaks of expression. Leslie
okey, this one I love....it's great. I don't really like rhyme schemes, but appart from that, I love it. I'm putting this one on my wall. :)
great job :) you are trully talented! it's a very beautiful poem! !
holy crap! ! I love it! ! ! seriously seriously love it! great job.
that poem was great.. i almost cried.. i know exactly how it feels
You express yourself well. I feel like so many people could relate to this. Another great poem. =)
Bilal, I’m Leaving A Letter Or two about your poem: Believe that it’s sure to get better And sorrows will soon be going. A bit trite, perhaps, but experience is talking here. At your age life can seem not worth living sometimes, but at least you’ve got it all before you. A great poem, though – keep on writing. Richard
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/6/2024 11:19:28 PM # 1.0.0
Solitude can give you introspective thoughts.A good way to get rid of loneliness is to trust your inner-guide-your Angel.You can't always depend on people but you can depend on your inner strength.I personally don't mind my own company.At least I can think then with no demands from other people.Good poem capturing the pain of loneliness....but we never walk alone...never...as long as you believe in yourself.Smile--I gave you another ten.